Editing “Second Wind”

As I was rereading Second Wind, my nearly 100K epic, I found several errors within just the first two chapters.  Sigh.

So, I’m in the process of editing.  When done, I’ll post it here, but it’ll be in chapters, not all together.  The reason for that is so that the new page editor doesn’t have a shit fit due to length.  This format (WordPress) can sometimes hang when the length of a fic is really long.

I’ll also repost to AO3.

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