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Hi all. Am starting a fic but I’m sans a beta, so public commenting is what I need.

Another Dark Side (for lack of a better title)

Summary:  A quantum mirror story featuring Jack as the universe traveler.  For once.

Author Note:  First, I’m forcing this bunny.  Second, I’m out of betas.  If this reads badly, apologies, but I have to write *something* or I’ll go insane.

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Love the idea…as long Jack and dann y are together in the journey at some point.